Your digital story made me think about.....my own family and some of the heirlooms that I have inherited. One thing you might think about changing is..... the music overpowers your voice during some parts of your story. The best thing about your digital story is..... I love all of the family pictures that you included.
Your digital story reminded me of my roots in WV. I was not born here, but I have lived here since I was 9. My families' roots run deep here.
One thing I would think about changing is the volume of your music. At some points I had no idea what you were saying. I think the first time it occurred was the slide with the books.
The best thing about your digital story was the story itself. This is going to be such a wonderful thing to pass down to your childern. Good job!
your digital story made me think of how alike we are - I wasn't born here either, but I family from here and consider it my adopted home.
One thing I would think about changing is the music. It is too dramatic for your simple, elegant story. It is hard to adjust the volume to account for both the high and lows of the music and I wonder if a simple piano or other solo string instrument would be better.
The best thing about your digital story is all the images. I love to looking at all that old stuff.
Your digital story made me think about.....my own family.
One thing you might think about changing is.....the music volume; your voice is more important:)
The best thing about your digital story is.....great images/ pics. I know if probably took a lot of time and effort to scan all of those images, but definitely worth it!
Your digital story made me think about.....my own family and some of the heirlooms that I have inherited.
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the music overpowers your voice during some parts of your story.
The best thing about your digital story is.....
I love all of the family pictures that you included.
Your digital story reminded me of my roots in WV. I was not born here, but I have lived here since I was 9. My families' roots run deep here.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I would think about changing is the volume of your music. At some points I had no idea what you were saying. I think the first time it occurred was the slide with the books.
The best thing about your digital story was the story itself. This is going to be such a wonderful thing to pass down to your childern. Good job!
your digital story made me think of how alike we are - I wasn't born here either, but I family from here and consider it my adopted home.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I would think about changing is the music. It is too dramatic for your simple, elegant story. It is hard to adjust the volume to account for both the high and lows of the music and I wonder if a simple piano or other solo string instrument would be better.
The best thing about your digital story is all the images. I love to looking at all that old stuff.
Your digital story made me think about.....Family heritage.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is.....editing the volume.
The best thing about your digital story is.....your pictures.
Your digital story made me think about.....my own family.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is.....the music volume; your voice is more important:)
The best thing about your digital story is.....great images/ pics. I know if probably took a lot of time and effort to scan all of those images, but definitely worth it!